Creative Writing

[ChinaVoodoo]

I just finished a short story, and I thought that I might leave it here so people can read it.
Maybe there are more of you out there who would like to share creative writing, and post it here.

 

[webmost]

I like the last line.

 

[deluxestogie]

You may find www.critique.org helpful. It's free, and has an excellent reputation in the writing community.

Bob

 

[BarG]

I love creative writing , Can I introduce some childrens books from a friend" These are e books from a gal I know.

 

[Bex]

It certainly does keep you reading along, wanting to know what happens - the first sentence of the story grabs you and piques your interest. And really nice descriptive paragraphs. My only question, after reading it, was that I could never figure out what kind of work you were doing - what kind of job that puts you in a position of the ability to sabotage...some kind of nuclear plant or place that uses radioactive material??